Friedrich vom Berg:if Galt is somebody who "had always had a somewhat rose-tinted view of the British Empire, seeing it as a civilizing force for peace and stability" the dissolution of said empire should have some impact on him.
Friedrich vom Berg:The way he is now, he is just some big bad (or good) with superpowers
Friedrich vom Berg:They seem to be some British guys who are willing to get all magical to defend (what exactly? Britain and only Britain? The UK? The Empire? The Commonwealth?) and who have some undying superman.
Friedrich vom Berg:What i miss in this is both the fractionous nature and the air of a battle lost before begun of the other conspiracy.
Friedrich vom Berg:It is neat as a draft, but not so good as a completed conspiracy.
Octavian_5:The difference is, of course, that I assume that the Smithy made said bound-jawbone, and didn't find it.
Octavian_5:That's what I think you should do with the Endowments: lose the tech angle. Keep that "aesthetic" of binding spirits to items. No reason to have two styles of Endowments.
Octavian_5:And, because every Compact or Conspiracy needs something wrong with it, this also sets it up really well for a "let not the left hand..." situation.
Friedrich vom Berg:Would be a little strange if a group which started with a large scale desecration of corpses (for whatever reasons) would be the only one to hold the torch of truest purpose and highest morale.
Friedrich vom Berg:There has to be something wrong with the conspiracies and compacts for the simple reason that this is the world of darkness.
Octavian_5:A monocle? Jolly good! Might I also reccommend a more...offensive Endowment: a sword cane with some type of violent spirit attached to it. Sword canes (and variants including cane-guns) were very popular during the Victorian Era. Obviously, only men would use canes, so women sometimes carried Derringers in their muffs (those fur-tube things), hence the classification of "muff-pistol", a small, usually single-or-double-shot pistol used by women.As for the sword cane, perhaps the spirit bound to it does extra damage (or something), but it's like eating Pringles. Once you start killing with this sword, it's just so. Hard. To. Stop.
DavidT:To get back at topic... It sounds all bloody good to me man. Keep it up and forget the naysayers. They only complicate things to the point it only fits their image instead of yours.